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private drawings such as sketches, portraits and various handmade drawings. Due to the fact that it is not possible to hide folders, I decided to use this form of collecting my works
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Description
Image size
2225x3221px 1.2 MB
Make
LG Electronics
Model
LG-D725
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
3 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Aug 29, 2015, 4:39:29 PM
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Hello! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="25" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="437" title="Hi!"/>
So I'm leaving some feedback in thanks for your donation. Thank you so much, I truly appreciate your generosity! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/> Ok, so here's the critique! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
First off, these are super eye catching! You do this wonderfully, with fantastic use of lines, contrast, and shape. It's very very clean - it's easy to see flaws and laziness on the artist's part in something like this, but you did an impressive job!
This work is very complete and successful by itself, but if I had to say anything constructive, I would give you two suggestions - one, to try adding some more pure whites, just to push that contrast even more. And two, I don't know if you've ever considered this, but I always enjoy the concept of adding just one splash of bright color to pieces like these! It's something you could play with. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
Fantastic piece! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="37" height="25" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="600" title=""/>